C+C?
Hmm I think I need to widen the purple one's legs, and shorten said legs :/
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C+C? Hmm I think I need to widen the purple one's legs, and shorten said legs :/
04-12-2010, 05:39 PM
they're all disturbingly fat; and White and Purple pikmin need to have have much more noticeable propotion changes than the others.
04-12-2010, 05:41 PM
I was trying to go for a chubby look for all of them, I can agree the purple pikmin needs to be a bit bigger, but wasnt the white one the same size as the other 3?
04-12-2010, 05:41 PM
dont use white as a base color.
04-12-2010, 05:49 PM
the red's nose looks more like a deformed smile, and they're uncomfortably stiff. Plus, nobody's head normally is at a 3/4 while their body faces forward
04-12-2010, 05:51 PM
Fattened purple a good few pixels, made white thinner a good few pixels, used a light grey as a base...
04-12-2010, 06:00 PM
mean, dont use white as the color of the canvas. use whatever desaturated color you want.
amd somehow fix the shape of those pikmins so they wouldn't look like a mix between teletubbies and power rangers :/
04-12-2010, 06:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-12-2010, 06:12 PM by Vipershark.)
white pikmin is also shorter than the others
he needs to be about 3/4ths as tall
04-12-2010, 07:49 PM
you didn't fix the nose on the red one >:U
I see where the joke lies
that aside, I can understand going for a chubby sort of look. I think these need a lot more work. In all honesty, it just looks like you did a two minute rush job without using an reference. The eyes of each pikmin could be less blocky and they could differ more from each other. Also want to point out the stems on their heads are usually colored, and a bit thicker. Thanked by: Baegal
04-12-2010, 09:21 PM
I havent done anyhthing to the eyes sans the red pikmin, and sorry baegal I looked over your crit on the nose thing earlier. Haha sorry bout that
04-13-2010, 10:31 AM
The white one's palette is too bright, try to make the outline and the second shade darker. Also, the eyes are stiil too blocky, and red ones make him look like he is looking at the floor.
04-13-2010, 11:27 AM
put the irises in the middle of the eyes, not the corners
04-13-2010, 12:49 PM
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