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05-02-2010, 04:26 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-02-2010, 04:26 PM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
I seriously love that Yoshi design, it's hilarious!
*saves sheet to hard drive for future reference*
YOU HAVE TO FEEL WHAT YOU DRAW, FEEL
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But no seriously, were you kidding when you made these?
(Not trying to go against you at all, just wanna know.)
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05-02-2010, 04:56 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-02-2010, 04:56 PM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
Much as I like the design, I think you should add a body to your Yoshi, he's got legs, arms and a head but no real body. I also think that the intermediate shades looks awkward because of their desaturation which contrasts with the saturated rest. The lineart is too jagged and shading conveys volume poorly. I don't have time for an edit
*goes off to draw a cypher-yoshi*
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"This is my best work so no meanie comments" Seriously? You can't command someone to not criticize your work. Everyone is entitled to an opinion. You need to be mature enough to take it.
Anyways, i guess you've got the principles down but, quite frankly, your Yoshi looks like a tadpole with feet. It looks like he barely has a neck and he has quite a few details missing. As Gorsal said, don't use pillow shading (adding darker pixels around the area outline) it just looks terrible. Also, remember to shade ALL of your frames. Finally, i think you should fix up the tongue. I mean you can tell it's a tongue but it looks more like an arrow.
Use a reference next time so you get a better result.
Also, it's been said before but your poll is irrelevant to the topic.
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Yoshi looks like some kind of green mutant tadpole, actually. He doesn't even have a head, if you check carefully.
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i cant believe luigi is that popular
i love DK
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and with that everyone bashed this crap.
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05-05-2010, 07:33 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-05-2010, 07:37 PM by Cypher The Hedgehog.)
Here's the updated version. its not yet done though
http://i44.tinypic.com/esw8lh.png
(05-02-2010, 04:36 PM)Iceman404 Wrote:
But no seriously, were you kidding when you made these?
(Not trying to go against you at all, just wanna know.)
had nuthin to do. i used pencil btw
I seriously do not understand this topic, at all. What the fuck happened?
Cypher, make a new topic, because I'm not going to wade through all these posts to find out what I'm ACTUALLY supposed to be looking at. :I