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Kirby YI Style
#1
This is the Kirby I'm using for my fangame. Now, I'll submit it if it looks good. Personally, I think I did a nice job. What do you think?
   
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#2
Looks fine to me...although the hammer is too long and the sword is too short. Otherwise, great jorb.
I don't get it, either.
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#3
Doesn't really seem like it's in YI style, but still pretty decent.
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#4
Thanks... that sword doesn't reach that far whenever I test out the game, but I always though it was short anyway.
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#5
You should have made the feet less blocky. It looks like you only made 2 feet sprites, i'd suggest making the feet fit each sprite
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#6
Eh, Kirby needs better contrast. Perhaps lighten his skin tone? It may help make Kirby not look so angry when he's really expression-less.

Also your animations are incomplete/stiff. For example when Kirby uses Final Cutter, he does a Cutter uppercut, a buzzsaw spin in mid-air, and then comes down to the ground to release his Cutter Wave to finish the Final Cutter attack.
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#7
it does need contrast
it seems a little dark to me
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#8
Those sprites are a disgrace to Kirby.
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#9
Kirby's a tad dark. That's all I can say. Nice job.
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#10
Ngamer01 Wrote:Eh, Kirby needs better contrast. Perhaps lighten his skin tone? It may help make Kirby not look so angry when he's really expression-less.

This is basically the only problem I have with it. Otherwise, good job, Colton. I thought about making a YI Kirby myself, but I never got it finished.
Let's just get one thing straight: My username has NOTHING to do with the Megaman character, Zero.
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#11
Okay... so he just needs to be brighter.... and then he's pretty much fine after that, right?
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#12
definitely very dark. not exactly YI style either.
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#14
Kirby is a lighter pink, and it really doesn't look the style.
Still thinking of a new name.
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#15
Not really in style, too dark, and he looks angry in every sprite >_>
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