Character Help

[Saltonara]

no 1up, you're wrong

[Iceman404]

no 1up, you're wrong

No, I still read his pointless posts. But I blocked him so I wouldn't have to see his annoying PM's.

EDIT: Also, nice try, getting me to thank your post Colton.

[triptych]

No, I still read his pointless posts. But I blocked him so I wouldn't have to see his annoying PM's.

way to be mature about this, guy!!!!!!!


oh well
at least now no one can say i didnt try

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sorry for shitting up your thread with the *drama*, OP

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honestly i was going to do this in spamhaul but i doubt he even goes to spamhaul

[GrooveMan.exe]

FFS, 1up, could you please not hijack the thread like that? Iceman, you're not helping.

[Baegal]

2-D, the only problem I see right now with the sprite is that the botton of his head still looks like an upside-down egg. Try to give him a jawbone and give him a wider mouth

ignore the other side bars, and look at this head. It's not the best example, however it does show that just-out at the botton of the head near the jawbone, while your sprite seems to leave that part out and it suddenly gets smaller as it nears the neck.

[2+D]

Yeah I kinda see that now, I will try somethingbetter. And please, sop talking about something that has nothing to do with the sprite that Im doing, because its pointless to talk about something way out of the main area of work. And if you guys want to keep on talking about your own personal problems, then go head and open our own thread and leave it to yourselfs. Thank you.

[triptych]

And please, sop talking about something that has nothing to do with the sprite that Im doing, because its pointless to talk about something way out of the main area of work. And if you guys want to keep on talking about your own personal problems, then go head and open our own thread and leave it to yourselfs. Thank you.

oh my god shut up it's been handled by both us and a mod already


i dont even feel like explaining what i changed for you anymore so i'll just give you this picture and hope you're competent enough to figure out what i fixed


i will say this though
if you're going to make something this simple, know how to make it look good, don't just "do" simple for the sake of simple

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by the way, i just feel the need to bring this up

your sprite shares so many qualities and traits with the sprites i used for a game project back in 2008 or something i dont even remember

just
the way you did everything could not remind me more of them

there's that which is really all i can find on my pixeljoint account but seriously


look at the one on the right and compare the way you did everything to that sprite

and look at that

i dont know i might just be being a little paranoid here but
you're reminding me so much of my old shit(literally, shit)
the blatantly flat look to the sprites, the way you did the legs, the arms, the entire body really
it's all making me /curious/

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i dont know if you tried stealing or were inspired by them or if this is just a huge coincidence because the style is really common and idk or what but

yeah

[2+D]

Well, it must be coinsidence, because I just treid this like 1 or 2 weeks ago, and I dont recall ever looking at those sprites.
And I kinda like the way you re-made what was my problem, and I appriciate that. But what I dont like is the fact of you saying that sprting is simple. It isnt the same case for everybody, not for you, for me, or for anybody in this entire forum. So dont say that everything is simple, just because you can do it better.

[Gors]

uhh

he didn't say that spriting was simple

he said that the STYLE used on the sprites is simple (i.e small amount of shades)

[triptych]

no you completely missed my point there

your sprite has a very simple look to it
i'm not saying it is simple, i'm saying it looks simple. and simple /looking/ styles are generally ones that new spriters(not even sure if you're new or not, but you're making mistakes that most people new to pixel art make) attempt to make, and they tend to do a less-than-decent job because they overdo so much of it.

i guess it might be easier to understand if i reword my point?
If you're going to make something /look/ simple, it helps to know how to accomplish that look. Don't just try simple because you think it might be easy

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oh hey gorsal posted before me

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so yeah p.much what gorsal said too

[2+D]

Ok, I see better now, sorry for that. Anyways, I'll try to not make /simple/ mistakes. And so far not much to do in the head problem, I might use your re-make as a reference for shading princaipal wailson. But I doubt that I will use some things that are in it.

[Shawn]

its now a competition

[triptych]

shawn wins competition over

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shawn and his pussy spelling of the word colors

[Shawn]

what the fuck>?? stop replying so fast

[triptych]

i can't help it my internet is on crack right now