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Huge improvements; frickin' love the red robot.
The lines still seem kinda eh and te shading still isn't very good but they're getting there.
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the lineart seems a little of on some guys, especially the red robot's right arm.
the green cat is the best
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I definitely remember helping you with the fat green guy ages ago aha.
Line art has always been your biggest problem. You need to work on getting your characters into simple shapes and working off those shape instead of jumping straight into drawing your character. Also the Knight's face is completely unreadable.
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thanks guys, I'll get to fixing these guys up
starting with the knight because even I can barely read his face
and @ chris; heh, forgot about that stuff, maybe I'll work on that Bowser Blastoise later
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Im really digging your style K, Specially for the fact that it looks like a cartoon yet a simple sprite...I just love it. great work so far.
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I like it all, but the last guy doesnt look like he was shaded that much
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Oh, I'm not done shading the last guy yet
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oh, well other than that they are all really good
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I remember back when you first joined. At PT I think? And you used to suck /really badly/.
You've made insane amounts of improvement, so congrats on that. These look really good.