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08-29-2010, 11:11 PM
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yeah I
mentioned earlier I would fix the shoulders
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okay im done working on this for tonight i've done literally nothing all day
idk, that hair looks like a lot of blue ice cream instead of hair
tone down the smoothness a lil'.
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08-30-2010, 09:07 AM
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there's something that really annoys me: you're putting a lot of shades in the hair, and the shades alternate between saturated and desaturated...
it doesn't look good. what i suggest is you get very saturated colours for highlights, and desaturate progressively to the darkest shade:
injected a bit of purple to make it more interesting, the result is similar, i know.
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redoing the face completely
i'll probably redo the eyes too but idk yet, they might just need to be moved a bit
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hey you just took the edit i did on your dude's hair >:c
oh and good luck on the face!
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08-30-2010, 05:24 PM
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(08-30-2010, 06:05 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote:
hmmmm
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08-30-2010, 11:57 PM
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headband sucks
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The texture for the headband feels a bit off. Is it meant to be camo print?
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change that nose please, it looks like he had some cheap plastic surgery... it's flat and straight (( i know nobody with a nose like that, mj is my nearest guess)) so i'd suggest you look for some refs (not necessarily somebody with a big honker, natch)
and i'd up the lightness on the headband too
the ear's looking good, keep following helm's advice
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i /think/ i fixed the nose????
it could probably stand to be """curved""" a bit more, but maybe not
idk
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dude
his nostrils
you've made them flat wtf
the highlight doesn't look right and nor does its shape
here's what i mean:
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