Miszi's Sprites

[Iceman404]

Looks like a banded, pillowshaded, un-light sourced, wonky line arted version of the KSSU & GBA sprites turned into their outline.

[Miszi]

Pretty much what i was going for minus the pillow shading and no light source. Would you suggest any other type of shading that would do better possibly?

EDIT:
My apology, found what i was looking for in the spriting dictionary topic, gonna fix the pillow shading tommorow if i'll have enough time and i'm gonna try and get the lines a bit smoother. Thanks for feedback.

EDIT2:
NVM, please close this topic. I need some more practice until i'm going to show any of my stuff on here. Thanks to everyone for critism though.

[StarSock64]

Why do people always say that

You don't need to close the topic if you're done with it for now. It just sinks down the page anyway.

also try to choose subjects that are more beneficial for learning...