Curly <3

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Her vagina looks like a little penis, is what the issue is here.
You should put creases, instead of drawing the actual vagina. No matter how many times it is shown in hentai, not all women's clothes are translucent.

[Pik]

BTW, for the skin tone, I'd make the blue a pale brown color so it looks more like skin.

[CeeY]

Ok I used some good Hue shifting on the android version, I made the base whit more pale brown, and about the vagina, what do you mean by creases, these are really tight stretch pants. Do you mean like a light line? Im working, and keep all of this great C+C coming because this is some of the best I could ever have on tsr, If you compare the first post to this update, that is because all of you continue to give me great criticism, and here is the update,

[Pik]

I would do it to the second shade of white, too.

[CeeY]

I would do it to the second shade of white, too.

Update, Fixed, but I still don't get the issue about the vagina? Also I rounded out the boobs,

[-Dark-]

that one light pixel on her vag makes it look kinda funky as if its sticking out lol. also chest area above her top piece shouldn't be shaded, cuz the light is directly hitting the whole area.

its getting better tho (:

[witw]

as well as the crotch i still think the knees look dodgy

[LilGrim1991]

Changed a few things, you don't have to keep em if you don't want to, just a little hard to describe, so I had to actually do it.

I accentuated the pubic triangle (that's the artistic term for it), by making it a little wider and I filled in some of the line in the bottom that was causing so much trouble, also, I took off some of the "roundness" of the breasts.

You can use it if you want to, but I suggest recreating it on your own.

Also, something I tried that worked but didn't have on this version, add a little line to the top of the knee cap like you did to the bottom, to make it seem more round, and to show where the knee starts.

[CeeY]

Thanks LilGrim, I took your advice, and added a little line to the top of the knee cap, but it is kind of invisible because if I made a line all the way across the knee, it looked weird, and on her ''public triangle, I took your advice and edited it, and I decided to keep the roundness on the breasts, update,