Old English House - FR-LG Style

[Confessor]

This is a house for a game being created called Pokemon Lime.

It's custom; based on the size and shape of the FRLG player house.

We're currently looking for spriters, so if you can do better than this, please apply.

Here's a link to our Progress thread:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=155932

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with vines:

[Geo the Fox]

I take it Lime happens to be your favorite fruit, Confessor?

[Confessor]

I like lime green. And will generally eat or drink anything that is artificially green. So yeah I like Lime.
better than Pokemon Peppermint amirite.
Maybe when I am older I will run Lime Enterprise?

now help me sprite

[Geo the Fox]

Too lazy. I will, however, critique it.

First off, it's too dark.

Second, it seems rather flat. It's not selling that whole, third-dimension thing. probably because of the roof. I can see that the roof is trying to make a sort of triangle shape. So, please look here.
http://spriters-resource.com/nintendo/po...rgeous.png
As you can see, you see roofs at at angle, so you should see the front and the back of that roof, one side brighter than the other. I also suggest making the top of the chimney visible as well. The vines look painted on too, so do... somethin' about that.

Third, I really think you should make the windows light blue. Or something. It's just lookin' weird, yanno?

[Confessor]

Thanks. I'm not sure about thre windows, but I'll definately fix the roof thing.