TSR card game [Postponed]

[Yo-Yo Boy]

That character will be my ref from now on.

[Hoeloe]

I think that I've got the eyes down now

You really, really don't. Those look so ugly it's unbearable. Your lineart is fundamentally flawed. Smoothing of lines should come BEFORE colouring and shading, and you can make minor alterations as you go as the structure comes together. Your lines are.... I don't know how to say it other than just plain awful.

The head is the right shape now, though. At least that's getting somewhere.

[Perseus]

[Yo-Yo Boy]

You didn't need to have my card pallete, you know.
You could make your own card pallete to have a personal touch to it.

[Garamonde]

Yo-Yo I can't even tell what your character is because your card is so dark...

[Perseus]

You didn't need to have my card pallete, you know.
You could make your own card pallete to have a personal touch to it.

Sorry, I kind of used yours as a base and didn't change it
Updated my post from before

[Zadaben]

@ Baegal: Wow! That looks awesome! Also, that isn't an official pallatte that I use, I just use it to prevent myself from going color-crazy.
@Yo-Yo: I'm not quit sure where your guy is in there, could you maybe highlight him a bit? Nice detail in the background, though.
@ Perseus: that looks great, Perseus! I love it!
@ Hoeloe: I normally colour things before I'm done eit the lineart so that I can see how it looks, that doesn't mean that I'm finished, though, I am going to fix the lines, but I havn't had much time today, I had plans to watch a movie with a friend of mine, so that ate up a bit of my time. Also tommorrow is my last day of break , so I need to finish soon, I'm WAY behind where I had hoped to be.
Also, do you guys want to invent your own specials, or should I make them?
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UPDATE:
Yo-Yo, I'm pending on yours because I'm not sure what it is yet.

[Zadaben]

I think this is a little better.
Still working on it.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

The features are more or less aligned, good! I think you could change the shape of the highlight, to give the impression it follows the curve of Gilbert's head.

[Vipershark]

My biggest problem is that that face looks nothing like Gilbert.
Are you using a ref?

[Zadaben]

@ Chris: Thanks!
@ Vipershark: Um.......Not really. Should I be?

[Vipershark]

...uh.
Yes?
lol

[TomGuycott]

That character will be my ref from now on.

Really, what is it? I'm curious and I can't make it out.

[Zadaben]

@Chris: Did you mean the white? If so, then like this?
@ Vipershark: I think I got the eyes a little closer to the gilbert in the Fighter's resource image, but I'm pretty sure that I messed them up again in the process.
Anyhow, End-Of-Day progress updater.

[Yo-Yo Boy]

My computer must have a higher light setting than you have.