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03-16-2012, 09:14 PM
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Some bases for a game but I want to get some critic first before I continue on with animations.
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03-17-2012, 07:35 AM
second guy to the left doesn't seem to fit into the same scale as the rest. 1st guy to the right's gun(?) just looks like a block, and has a jaggy shoulder and elbow. The 1st guy from the lefts, right foot looks bent and broken.
Are the first two guys supposed to be the same character in different stances and costumes. They look very similiar to me.
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03-17-2012, 03:43 PM (This post was last modified: 03-17-2012, 05:31 PM by mr-venusaur.)
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This any better?


Quote:Are the first two guys supposed to be the same character in different stances and costumes. They look very similiar to me.
Nope,its probably the jackets or the same colored hair that makes them seem similar.
I`ll probably redesign the first guy.
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03-18-2012, 06:48 AM
I think the first guy is the best out of the lot, and yellow suits the next best, but his gun is still a bit unrealistic, try making a trigger with his finger on it, or basing it of a real pistol, so you get the porportions and shapes right. The super heroes head, i can't distinguish eyes anywhere. I also think he needsmore shading.
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