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Doodles and Finished Pieces
So I tableted an abaasy which is a turkish demon that has one eye, arm, and leg and rides a dragon.

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But I have no idea how to make smooth outlines. Every time I try to make a nice black outline it ends up really wavy and messy looking.

HELP
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tracing digitally over an outline with the line/curve tool. First time doing it; gonna fix the mistakes once i dont need the outline and can delete that layer.

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small improvment with right arm and removed outline. shoulder is bugging me though/....

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You should really look on how legs connect at all, they're very thin too! The same could be said about the arms. Keep praticing!
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yeah. I got rid of the right leg. reworked the left arm partly...gonna go back to the right now that you've said something.

new edit with bigger arms.

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The head and neck are also proportionally way to small for that body. The head needs enlargement and the neck needs major beefing up.
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imageshack took it fine before...screw imageshack. screw them. updated in my last post. ill do that thx.

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nope, not good yet

the base you're using for tracing is all wonky and off-proportions.

study anatomy more, look for real references etc. the way it is now is ugly.
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i made it myself thats why. Ill find some tuts on deviant, study those and compare them then.
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All art should be made by the artist themselves. Your anatomy sucks, go to the library, get a book on anatomy, medical ones work well if you can't find a good one otherwise, and study it.
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it's just soo wavy~ I can't get mine like that lol.

looked up some tuts; the whole box/cube thing is tharder for me. i dunno why but i do get why it is necessary.

with that pose i was trying to do a laying down thing. usually i draw ppl standing, so that would've been a good change of pace. I'll figure this out~ *anme catchphrase here*
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(03-22-2012, 05:29 PM)Kakashifan Wrote: it's just soo wavy~ I can't get mine like that lol.

looked up some tuts; the whole box/cube thing is tharder for me. i dunno why but i do get why it is necessary.

with that pose i was trying to do a laying down thing. usually i draw ppl standing, so that would've been a good change of pace. I'll figure this out~ *anme catchphrase here*

While you should study proper anatomy, it's good to get references too, you can find photo of people in this pose or similar if you search for it.
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An anatomy practice doodle. My main problem here is the balance between the head and the body, since it looks kinda off compared to the rest of the body:

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Legs to the body as well. Those legs look kinda small compared to the torso. I suggest making the legs a little longer.
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