Smitty Greenbeard

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Well, Acouple of weeks ago I started a book, My first
book, Since Most of the time I like writing, it can be
a fun experiance as you can add anything.
My book is about smitty greenbeard and....Wait, I wont give
too much away, But This is page 1 of my book, and I need your
thoughts:

Smitty Greenbeard
And the Phantom glass arrow

Some people say. Stupidity is a curse, a shameful curse on one self that they cannot redeem. Unfortunately for this guy it doesn’t really abide those rules. This is Smitty Greenbeard, and yes, the name explains his appearance. He has a long green beard with sharp tips that could possibly give someone a paper cut if held by the hand.
He is a gnome, yep that’s right a gnome a small shrimp with a big red nose and an ego of a dried up shrivelled potatoes on Wednesdays. Unfortunately most people who say that are just stupid people with no eyes and can obviously not see what a gnome looks like, Smitty is a small little dude, and he has a moustache to top of his large green beard. He is a fairly strong gnome. He took on the role of a mage when he was 6, so he has quite a large reputation of being a very good mage, it’s a shame that he’s large amount of stupidity makes it so he has a tough time making magic.
Because of Smitty’s stupidity and large ego he has trouble making friends in the local school of might and magic, Smitty was born into a very wealthy family which means that he usually gets what he wants, he has all the armour gear, Which is another reason he has trouble making friends, They often say to Smitty that they want to take him into a dark alley way and beat the snot out of him. Which makes him very angry, but he is not so lucky at school, because he is a mage he is said to be in one of the weakest classes, but sometimes that really annoys him, why the hell does everyone think that mages are the weakest classes, oh of course, let’s all be warriors or paladins and run around showing off our giant swords and wicked beards wielding amazing power that could totally “own” everyone including a Mage.
Smitty lived in a small town, karamow. A town that holds many dark secrets, lots of kind of creepy people and thieves, Lots and lots of thief’s, To be honest you could probably by a crate of weapons then while walking home have all the weapons stolen and even the crate if you’re having a bad day. There is even a sign facing the way people come to enter the town saying “Be warned, you might be stabbed or robbed.” For some reason people still wonder why people come to this town.
This tale starts on a normal Thursday morning, nothing different except a couple of dwarf youths repeatedly smashing the pie out of a small gnome. As a matter of fact this gnome happens to have a Greenbeard and a big ego, yep, its Smitty. The dwarfs were elite warriors and as you guessed no match for Smitty, You see, he goes through a lot of beatings, that’s what inspires him to improve his magic quality. Smitty was being cornered into a dark corner where he would probably spend the last moments of his life. The dwarf with the long sword in his back has pushed Smitty against a wall and was going to pierce the sword through Smitty’s small heart. He plunged forward, the sword almost breathing on Smitty’s chest, but before he could stab him a dark shadow appeared behind the three dwarfs, it was a figure that picked up the three dwarfs and walked out of the alley way and threw them into a dumpster,

By the way thanks to anyone who read it, and if this is in the wrong
place I am sorry and could you mods please move it.