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#16
I uh, meant that the blue part needs to come up more... kinda like this:

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Sorry if I wasn't clear on that, it was kinda difficult to explain.
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#17
The hand on the right just looks weird as hell. I don't know what's wrong with it, but it just looks fuckin awful.

Also, you should consider a more dynamic pose. All that pose is telling me is that megaman shoots dudes. You may try by shifting his body the other direction on his legs, and bringing the arm in closer.
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wherever you are.
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#18
Attempted to shift his weight, drew the (horrible) hand in a bit, adjusted some other things
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So he found the heart in barren land
It was beating, still alive
He held it gently in his hand
And looked up to the sky
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#19
now lets try and turn the elements you have facing directly towards the camera, away. like the buster's positioning. maybe you could even consider re-orienting megamans entire pose? there's a lot of ways you could make this better and it's really up to you. Also, I'd suggest studying megamans face a little bit more, especially from the official artwork.

Also, try putting even more weight on that front leg
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wherever you are.
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