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the problem is that he is holding his cane too close to his body so it doesn't really look like it's supporting him
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for the side sprites I say the arm should be out more
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(05-20-2013, 06:12 PM)EpicEbilninja Wrote:
Not bad line art! I'd like to see some less straight legs and maybe the stomach line can use some more
selout.
What this sprite needs is less
pillow shading and
banding. It looks like your light is coming from the top, so the further down the sprite, the darker it should get.
You can find out what the text in bold means
here. Just work on those shading problems and it should look awesome!
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05-22-2013, 06:23 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-22-2013, 11:11 PM by Mr. Jam.)
yes, I've had problems with banding and pillowing before(I'm sure some people remember my older wario and waluigi sprites DX )... What I was attempting to do was make a larger mario in a m&l rpg-ish style, but it seems I have quite a bit to learn about shading, lightsources and even the design for Mario.
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