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I'm sorry if this is off topic... May I use the POW for a custom sheet I'm making?
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(12-16-2008, 09:19 PM)gorsal Wrote: Nice, katakana below the sprite... only... you made a lot of mistakes. You forgot to add dakuten (the '') in Kuribo (Goomba) and Patakuribo (Paragoomba). Also, your 'ta' is wrong. It should have a horizontal slash inside the three slashes. The 'pa' in Patapata (Paratroopa) is lacking a han dakuten (the °) and your 'ge' in Jugemu (Lakitu) looks like a 'gu'. The 'pu' in Choropuu (Monty Mole) looks like a 'bu' because it looks like a dakuten. You wrote Gesso (Blooper) as "Gu'nn" because your 'ge' looks like 'gu' (said before) and 'so' looks like a 'n'. Also, you could make the sokuon (small tsu) smaller.

Yeah, I realize that now. The problem is that the text is so small. I made the katakana text myself, and tried to keep it within size limits, so I'm sure there are mistakes perhaps you can help me edit them?

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Anyway...

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As you can see I'm taking my time. Christmas is slowing me down. But I'd like to know what you think of the Koopas?

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Looks good! REALLY good! Are there other Koopa versions that'll use the same "base sprites"?, 'cuz those look awesome!

As do the Boo and Dry Bones sprites, of course.
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I'm not too happy with Lakitu's cloud. Any suggestions?

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Oh man, Dry Bones is rad.

Koopa's cheek looks odd, though. Lakitu's cloud is alright, but it looks a tad too symmetrical? Lookin' good anyway!
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