Vipershark jinxed it.

[Gors]

at making witty titles.



I'm working on this PA... C+C please.

[JarJar]

Ho ho ho nice title, anyway theres bumps on that person's hair, the lineart for that should smooth and round, no?

[CeeY]

The beanstalk is looking good!

[Gors]

Ho ho ho nice title, anyway theres bumps on that person's hair, the lineart for that should smooth and round, no?

I... don't know, the reference I used ( http://www.gamespite.net/toastywiki/inde...starHeroes --scroll down) shows her with that bump, but the sprite itself is hard to see... I'll make a bumpless version.

PS: the 'beanstalk' in the image on the right is bugged. The correct one is the one in the left.

[Gors]

my friend The Kirby helped with this, so props to him

I'm going to attach it because I'm on a hurry, sorry about the trouble.
[attachment=1656]

[Gors]

Update, look my avatar

[CeeY]

looks nice! I love how you shaded the tree!

[Gors]

I made this for a thread in SM.net, I'm going to post it here, too I don't think I'm going to work on it more, though...

[Previous]

Cute
Could use more anti-aliasing, though.
The head's shape is a bit off, I'd say. The right jaw could be more circular to fit the rest.
Also I think you could go without the highlight on the shoe soles.

But nice overall :]

[Haru-D]

and more tonal shading to the face, then it will look perfect. Very cartoony.

[CeeY]

I don't like the hue on the hair, it needs to be blended in.

[Gors]

Thanks for the comments, guys

I tried to adress all the issues here (yeah, I worked on it more ). I wasn't sure about CeeY's criticism, what's 'blended hue'? Also, I believe the tonal shading is increasing the contrast on the skin shade, right? Sorry if I messed up

I'm going to attach it because I can't go to imageshack for some reason.

[CeeY]

Thanks for the comments, guys

I tried to adress all the issues here (yeah, I worked on it more ). I wasn't sure about CeeY's criticism, what's 'blended hue'? Also, I believe the tonal shading is increasing the contrast on the skin shade, right? Sorry if I messed up

I'm going to attach it because I can't go to imageshack for some reason.

The white dot doesn't fit well with the pink. It needs more blending.

[Pik]

I guess what he means is It needs to follow the shape of the hair.

[Gors]

okay, I'll work on it expect an update soon