Paper Mario Customs

[SeventhHero]

These are the first ever customs that I've ever made, so enjoy!

Lady Bow
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/upload...d78405.png

Bootler, Lady Bow's butler
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/upload...136330.png

and Finally, Watt the Lil' Sparky! =D
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/upload...753749.png

Please comment and criticize!

[Quinlan Vos]

Watt ain't half bad. Needs some work, for instance, it seems a little too circular and the sparky things seem too long. I would need a good refrence to back up my statement.

The ghosts, however, look to scribbly. Remove the outline, unless that's a style paper mario style you're trying to do...(and if it is a style, then add an outline to Watt...)
For bootler, there isn't even a single sprite of him "standing" still...I need to see a basic lineart to critique it.

[SeventhHero]

Actually, the very last one is.
I'm fixing the Watt one now,

and Ive made the outline a lighter color, I wasn't really intending
on doing Paper Mario style.

Bow
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/upload...d08550.png

Bootler
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/upload...133690.png

[CeeY]

There is no shading :/

[Quinlan Vos]

Bootler isn't so bad, but Lady Bow looks...odd. She isn't round like she should be. She looks like an old, wrinkled ghost, like a balloon that was blown up a week ago and now it's starting to get flatter. Look at the refrence you have on the same page. She's very round there. Also, the eyes look creepy. I don't know how to crit the eyes, so...yeah.

[SeventhHero]

There is no shading :/

Yes there is. maybe I should darken it..