Mag's Perfect Chaos

[Gwen]

The background and color choices are nice, but the anatomy of Mista Green is very bad. Neither sword have handles either.

[-Ash-]

I think you should stop putting so much detail into your sprites until you can fix your proportions, but that might just be me. I can only recommend sketching out the sprite first then posting that and get the crit you need on the whole subject of proportions.

[Kelvin]

I noticed something about the knights in that screencap.


The shoulders are at weird angles, and not just cuz that sword is ridiculously huge, but it actually looks dislocated. He's also leaning forward in a funny way and his legs wouldn't be that close together with a sword that big. If it's a non-combat pose, I'd think he'd keep the sword down or something, or maybe across his back or in some kind of holster.


This guy's heel looks like it's going behind the other one. Only reason I can think he'd be standing like that is he needs to pee and can't get his suit off. XD Sorry, but that's how it looks to me.

[EDIT]
I could be wrong about the guy's shoulder; that sword is blocking a good bit of it. Still looks odd.

[Mag]

Remember this guy? Well I was still working on it, but really slowly. See, I listen to people's CC, adjusted the lighting and colors, changed the details on stuff like the teeth, a whole mess of stuff since the last time it was here.

The Dark Sauce concept screenshot is on hatius as I work on all the CC everyone's been giving me. Don't think I've ever had this much CC! xD

It got a front page on Newgrounds though, so that's nice.

[Deathbringer]

I'm at a loss for words...