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Sup, my old thread got archived so I'm making a new one.

I added a few more assist trophies to my smash assist trophy set today:

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I always forget to post here, but secretly I love all of you.


p.s. I make my sprites bounce just because I know you people love it when I do that.
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I think Tingle's nose needs to be redder. Also, your stuff is so good that it makes me want to cry.
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#3
It's all very good, can't deny it, but the Chain Chomp's bugging me: it seems a bit oval, isn't it? Its mouth is weird looking too.
But besides that, everything's looking really great! Wink
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tingle should be bigger in general, only because he looks outta style compared to the other guys.

i was going to explain the stuff about chain chomp, but since im sorta bad at explaining, ill just drop this.

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(08-10-2014, 06:35 PM)recme Wrote: tingle should be bigger in general, only because he looks outta style compared to the other guys.

i was going to explain the stuff about chain chomp, but since im sorta bad at explaining, ill just drop this.

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Oh, I see now... I'm more of a visual guy than an "explaining" guy myself.
Glad you used a pic to explain it or I'd be lost.
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(08-10-2014, 06:35 PM)recme Wrote: tingle should be bigger in general, only because he looks outta style compared to the other guys.

i was going to explain the stuff about chain chomp, but since im sorta bad at explaining, ill just drop this.

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This is mostly good, but you needn't have changed the chain loops, Im pretty sure he did that to convey depth.
Additionally the lightest highlight on the chomp's head should probably be a little smaller, as neorice had it initially
other than that, it's definitely an improvement.
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll try to put the suggested tweaks into chainchomp & tingle's nose asap.
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