Kirby Custom Sprites

[Modeling Clay]

Hello, my name is Modeling Clay and I am a Kirby Fan. This thread will be about my sprites. Most of them will probably be Kirby, but I also do Custom Pokemon Trainer Sprites.



Kookler (Bubbly Clouds)


Booler (Castle LoLoLo)


Chuckles (Caste LoLoLo)




Any criticism and and comments would be appreciated ^w^

[E-Man]

Is it just me, or are some of these sprites a little bit pillow shaded (especially for Kookler)?

[Modeling Clay]

Yeah, I just noticed. I will fix those problems tho.

[eureka]

Well I figure welcomes are in order.

Hi im nate :0)
I like Kirby too and Hope you enjoy your stay here~
Your sprites are cool BTW .

[Modeling Clay]

I fixed Kookler and Booler but, I might redo Chuckles all over again. 





I also did Blopper (Extra Mode Enemy)



Any comments will be aprriciated

[Alexsani]

First of all, I really like that Blopper at first glance, something about that playful style.

Something I HAVE to point out though is the fact that Booler is heavily banded.
I tried a quick edit to show you what I mean, yours is bottom and my edit is top

Try to use the other shades as some sort of blending, not as concentric layers moving into the sprite.  So in mine, I thought about trying to soften the edge on top, and kept the dark outline on the bottom as sort of a shadow from the light source, and used the 2nd darkest blue to blend that into the 2nd lightest one.  Try to look up anti-aliasing, banding, and pillowshading to try to understand some more about what this is, why it is a problem, and how to fix it.

[Ton]

Are these all official colors? Also, you'll have a better shot of stuff getting up on the site if you put them on one sheet.