11-19-2014, 09:36 PM
Waluigi Land (Super Wario Bros 64)
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Critique before I start animating is appreciated. :>
Critique before I start animating is appreciated. :>
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11-19-2014, 09:53 PM
This might be just me, but I think he is leaning too far to the right. As he is now, it is almost like he is simply going to fall over.
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11-19-2014, 09:54 PM
its only his head leaning forward. i recommend putting it a pixel back
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![[Image: ibl2rgREtPvKOA.png]](http://i.minus.com/ibl2rgREtPvKOA.png) ![[Image: iONTthKx73uzj.png]](http://i.minus.com/iONTthKx73uzj.png) Head is now attached to spine. I also bent the leg slightly to give a visually more stable stance. Thanked by: psychospacecow
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Made a few more little changes.
![[Image: ibzPImEFCE92nf.png]](http://i.minus.com/ibzPImEFCE92nf.png) ![[Image: ibfziPjVZDKBVz.png]](http://i.minus.com/ibfziPjVZDKBVz.png) Mostly fixed the shoulder a bit. Thanked by: TomGuycott
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11-20-2014, 12:01 PM
I think that the buttons should be shifted to the right a little bit because as it stands it looks as though his torso is facing right smack toward us. Wario's are more to the side.
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11-20-2014, 06:33 PM
![[Image: ibq0EXyDaIbrBe.png]](http://i.minus.com/ibq0EXyDaIbrBe.png) Another very minor edit incorporating what Mighty mentioned by moving a few pixels around the overalls. Thanked by: Garamonde, Crappy Blue Luigi, Neweegee
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11-21-2014, 01:11 PM
Only prob I see now is that Waluigi's chin isn't pointing down enough.
![[Image: i_turned_my_chin.png]](http://s1.postimg.org/qe0rk1a3f/i_turned_my_chin.png) Just needs a slight adjustment like this edit.
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11-21-2014, 02:44 PM
I really dig this. Maybe make his feet a pixel longer? Or try the buttons as 1x2 pixels instead of 2x2? Just a thought.
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11-21-2014, 07:06 PM
Really appreciate the input so far. Shoes are lengthened, chin is pointed, Waluigi is ugly as ever.
![[Image: iEzYYzP7OAiHl.png]](http://i.minus.com/iEzYYzP7OAiHl.png) Couldn't shrink the buttons due to readability issues, sorry about that. :< Thanked by: Neweegee, DragonDePlatino
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