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#1
02-21-2009, 07:30 AM (This post was last modified: 02-22-2009, 05:08 PM by Heinze.)
Hi! Heinze's here, i gonna post my newer sprites here, everytime i finish one, i going to put it here and in PixelJoint (Don't Forget to comment in PJ)
First... I made this fighter here, whata do you think?^^

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And the other is a little old, have it's own topic here but, whatever...
Mario in my Style

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Lil Dude Stormtrooper

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Pixel Joint Profile -> http://pixeljoint.com/p/20698.htm
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#2
02-21-2009, 07:38 AM
I think you should make that fighter's arms and head/hair move slightly, and make the legs animate more smoothly ( I have the impression you selected part of the sprite and moved it upwards or downwards) by re-drawing the leg frame by frame. It's nice nevertheless Smile
The mario's fine, maybe put a bit more contrast.
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02-21-2009, 08:19 AM
Thanks Chris ^^
Updated with Pixel Joint profile
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02-21-2009, 11:39 AM
I think that, besides clipping some of the fighter´s legs, there should be more movement, like his retracted hand going up and down, etc. but i loved them!
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

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#5
02-21-2009, 12:30 PM
post your opinions on pisel joint too ^^
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02-21-2009, 12:46 PM
i forgot my pixel joint password, and i don´t feel like making another. i will remember somehow.
i forgot my wordpress account too.. MY DEAR BLOG T__T
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

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02-22-2009, 09:19 AM
Oh man... Whata a pity =p
remember you acc so...
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#8
02-22-2009, 05:09 PM
*UPDATE*
Lil Dude Stortrooper
*UPDATE*

More to go! ^^
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