ninstar's W&WLRPGIII [Waluigi's Topic]

[Star]

The arms on the side pose should be moved a little bit more to his side. It's hard to explain. If you're still having trouble with it, just tell me and I'll try to make it.
Loving how it's coming out so far though. And look at that, you're already starting on the diagonal! Amazing.

[Kitsu]

^What he said. His arms should sort of be


Also, where's his neck?

[Croshi]

Good, but his side arm should be even with his body, because otherwise he looks like he's running in a weird postiion.

But lookin good so far!

[Ninspriterx]

Still need help.

[Croshi]

The Side poses knees look a little too bent, but his arm looks good. The diagonal pose looks a little skinny...

[Heinze]

So ... Am I helping you Nin?

[Croshi]

So ... Am I helped you Nin?

It looks like he has boob.
Now that I think of it, it looks more like the legs are messed up.

[Heinze]

Hmm.. I'll see it later ^^
Thanks Croshi ^^

[Tero]

On diagonal pose, I think he head needs to be a little more forward.

[Star]

I tried to fix it. If it's still not right it should look at least something like this.

[Adam]

That's better but now it looks as if the arm is protruding from the neck, and it makes it look a tad too short.

Nice work so far though, you guys...!

[Cshad]

The shoulder could stand to be lower. He also looks...scrunched together?

[Tero]

The main thing I notice is his lack of neck, it makes him look weird.

[HylianFox]

*looks at topic*

umm... shouldn't that be W&WLRPGIII?

Anywho, looks good so far

[Ninspriterx]

*looks at topic*

umm... shouldn't that be W&WLRPGIII?

Anywho, looks good so far

Oh, silly me. :]

here's your update: