[Art] Old Guy

[GaryASPG]

[GaryASPG]

Donnie Darko

[Gold]

There's an old guy who looks just like that, who shops where I work quite often.

[GaryASPG]

send him a link to thsi topic

[lone wolf-rayet star]

i didn't know you liked old men

Pretty good, though Donnie's face looks a bit lopsided.

[kyrtuck]

Good job on the coloring and wrinkles. I like it.

[Rakia]

There's an old guy who looks just like that, who shops where I work quite often.

There's an old man everywhere in the world just like that.
Good resemblance to Donnie, and I like all the details on the old man.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Did you use a ref for the old guy? Or was it something you did while you were out?
The hair rendering for Donnie is a bit strange, I would've made the strokes follow his hairline/shape of clumps of hair. He also looks like he's got a huge head, which is due to proportion issues. The hood seems to float around Donnie's head; saying this, I haven't seen the ref.
You got some pretty good sketching skills, keep it coming!

[GaryASPG]

i did the old guy while i was out eating lunch at mcdonalds


but here's the ref for donnie - > http://s178.photobucket.com/albums/w274/..._TOP-1.jpg

thansk for the C&C guys ill be sure to make some edits on donnie soon : -- )

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

i did the old guy while i was out eating lunch at mcdonalds

Lol
You've captured Donnie's essence, but in terms of ressemblance it's not there yet, due to the proportions problem.
Two ways of solving that: practice and...
Ever seen artist hold their pens and stick their tongues out? Anyway, you take the top of your pen, thumb length from the top, and use it as a unit to build up your picture and proportions. From these "measures", you set out a grid (3x3 inches, for example). And you then fill with detail.