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06-08-2008, 11:06 AM
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I made a custom M&L Dolphin, and I made all the poses. I want you to approve it, so I know what Improvements I need to make. I made the Dolphin first, I will be making more creatures from SMW, and I also plan on submitting it. (sheet update #6)
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woah! those are pretty good! my only suggestion is that you make the tail on the vertically facing ones darker.
other than that, good job!
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Hm, the lineart is excellent, however, I don't think the shading fits the style. I wouldn't consider these enemies if it weren't for the fact that Yoshi was able to eat them in SMW XD But if you fix the shading, it should look nice. I think there's an M&L tutorial on the site. But as said, the lineart is nice, also, I like your color choice.
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toastersaurus Wrote:woah! those are pretty good! my only suggestion is that you make the tail on the vertically facing ones darker.
other than that, good job!
Ok, I made the tails on the vertical jumping motion darker.
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Like Colton said... You need to arrange the shading, but the others things on the sprite are correct. Just arrange the shading and that will be perfect.
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don't their tail fins go the other way? It looks like a sharks tail fin.
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FinalYoshi Wrote:Like Colton said... You need to arrange the shading, but the others things on the sprite are correct. Just arrange the shading and that will be perfect.
Ok, I arranged the shading to fit the style.
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pretty good... better than my blogg for metroid prime 2, I just cant get the swimming part right...
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It doesn't look AA'd right, and needs more contrast. The shading is also a bit wierd...
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06-08-2008, 09:14 PM
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Elebit Wrote:It doesn't look AA'd right, and needs more contrast. The shading is also a bit wierd...
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Pretty good. It looks like it has a shark's tail though.
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06-08-2008, 09:29 PM
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Plasma Trooper Wrote:Pretty good. It looks like it has a shark's tail though.
I thought that the lineart would look better.
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Anyway, which enemy/ally from SMW should I do next in M&L style that is not already on TSR?
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I have noticed that you use three shades. everything but human skin in ML style has 2. still, good job.
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CoolYoshi Wrote:Anyway, which enemy/ally from SMW should I do next in M&L style that is not already on TSR?
How about... Cheep Cheeps? I haven't seen any on TSR yet.
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CoolYoshi Wrote:Maybe you see something I don't.