The 1 Month, nothing to do Mabelma's Project

[Mabelma]

Nice.
4 looks awesome.
Thanks.

[Mabelma]

I made this.

I know that some of the lineart is bad and that it has no shading but I'll add shading later don't worry.

[Mabelma]

I'm going to make some tiles for Cap. So expect some tiles today.
What do you think of Mr. Bee over there.

[King of Bad Posters]

The pose is wierd the wings are really wierd there should be one that he looks more platform the colors can improve a little.

[Mabelma]

The pose is wierd the wings are really wierd there should be one that he looks more platform the colors can improve a little.

I don't get what you mean by more platform.

[King of Bad Posters]

I made a mistake the wing are fine just make them a little lower cause one of them is up to his neck.

[Mabelma]

OK then I'll fix that.I'll do that and work on your tiles now. So bye for a bit.
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Check it out. I fixed Bee Mario and make a tileset for Cap. Tell me what you think.
Bee Mario:

Tile:

Tile:

I'm thinking of changing Bee Mario's palette and adding some shading to it but let's see what happens.

[Mabelma]

For today I have made a little rocky tile Tell me what you think on any of my sprites. C+C away. I'm going to work on something now let's see if I get to post it.

[Mabelma]

Since guitars are awesome and guns are awesome why not have a guitar gun? I made this for today. C+C it and I'll try and make a better pallet but I'm really bada with them.
I'm going to make some notes for the gun and I'll even try to make a game with it. Maybe some thing like galaga or something like that.
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Six Notes for an awesome guitar gun:
#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

#6

I've done my part now it's your turn to C+C my work.

[Shawn]

im not seeing a guitar OR a gun in that thing.

[Mabelma]

I know it's just that it was first a guitar and then I wanted to make it a gun so I made that. what do you think of it? Are the notes good?

[JarJar]

I think the guitar stinks and the notes are too small.

guitar is in an overused diagonal position and i see you tried to make it look original but you didn't do good at doing that so i suggest you make it look like a regular guitar shape with different patterns on it cuz right now it looks like a 2 headed snake licking a bamboo stick and one is taking a poopie.

[King of Bad Posters]

As anibus said the design is no good you better off making a regular guitar and the notes are a lil too small some of then aren't round enough like the 6th one isnt and 4th make em a little bigger.

[Mabelma]

OK I'll make the notes bigger and make the guitar better. I'll just stick with a guitar cause it looks bad like a gun.

[King of Bad Posters]

#5 is perfect though the rest need editing.