06-18-2008, 03:49 AM
I'm sorry but.... it's hard to start where the mistakes begin. :s
There's no shading, the shaping is bad, there is no sense of texture nor sense of presence, no sense of depth and no common sense put into this sheet.
The characters themselves don't look like they fit together well with the background and the crowd looks horribly photoshopped. The crowd is also another example of clashing styles especially since the crowd appears to be from a photograph.
If this is going to be in the "Super Smash Flash 2" I've heard so much about, you guys need to really practice your pixel work. :s
There's no shading, the shaping is bad, there is no sense of texture nor sense of presence, no sense of depth and no common sense put into this sheet.
The characters themselves don't look like they fit together well with the background and the crowd looks horribly photoshopped. The crowd is also another example of clashing styles especially since the crowd appears to be from a photograph.
If this is going to be in the "Super Smash Flash 2" I've heard so much about, you guys need to really practice your pixel work. :s
