Should I expand/ work on this more?

[Kenjitake]

I need to make more topics... anyhoo, I have this sheet of a Metroid Zero Mission Phazon suit Samus that I made the summer of last year but didn't bother to submit it before I left. So after sometime, I just tweaked and added parts to it, and seeing it again made me think "Should I submit it to TSR? Or should I first see what others say, possibly improve, possibly expand, then submit?"... Picked the second choice, so here it is (Note- this is an OLD sheet, I have not done much on it besides a few recoloring here and there and stuff)