05-23-2009, 12:12 PM
(05-23-2009, 10:24 AM)Zee Wrote: But you're saying we can't criticize it for being boring because the story has just started, and we've already expressed that we didn't like the sprite mixing becuase it looks very ugly. So either get the story to a point where you're willing to accept criticism, or stop using that excuse.
No, I'm saying that you can't criticize a sprite comic just because it's serious and about Sonic, and you never explain what sprite mixing you're talking about or how it looks ugly. I do accept criticism, not narrow-minded bias from people who don't think outside the box.
Yes, I'll admit, the first season of Q4CE didn't scratch the surface of the story, but the next story arc will have more meat in the story.
(05-23-2009, 10:24 AM)Zee Wrote: Periodicals and episodes face a unique challenge, they need to make things interesting every time to keep their readership/watchers interested. Look at a how books begin, if they're of a merit onto their own, the first paragraph is enough to suck you into the rest of the story. If the first chapter is boring, then second chapter is boring why do we want to read the third chapter? It's established a pattern of being boring and we don't want to read it.
Perseverance, hope that you'll get interested after the boring parts.
(05-23-2009, 10:24 AM)Zee Wrote: Do you see what I'm saying? Your excuse that it's not developed along in the story to argue the merits of the story means nothing to a reader. We're bored now, why should we stick around just because you promise it gets better? Heck, give us something NOW that can prove your literary or graphical talent to make us want to come back.
Very well, I shall post something later today.