06-20-2009, 08:20 AM
posting this one as reference.
one of the main problems your ship had was that you tried to render all the details on the top of the hull with so many lines that you ended making it unreadable. for that size, try to make it more simple. also, you forgot a pair of wings. add these, post a clean lineart(uploading it to imageshack or any other image hosting site) and then we'll see how to shade it.