06-20-2009, 01:42 PM
(06-20-2009, 12:38 PM)EpicWes Wrote: Looked at some references and changed somethings. How is it now?
Some critique on the Lapras... it'd be a bit difficult for me to explain, but I'll try to. If I had permission to edit your sprites, I could show you exactly what I mean but in lue of that...
- Body seems a tish too large, mostly in length.
- The knobs (...) on the shell should array outwards, not up.
- Shell shape (rim) doesn't seem quite right.
- The fins are thinner at the attachment points to the body, then radiate out larger, then taper at the tips, rather then being nubs.
- The chest should not flop to the ground like that, but rather curve upwards more gracefully.
- Shorten the snout a bit (not too much, but a bit), and move the horn a bit to the right. It doesn't seem quite centered...
You know, this project seems fun. I may try doing some sprites for it, though I don't know how well I'll do. Is there any colour limitations or anything?