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06-30-2008, 05:49 PM
You can write pretty well at least, but I wasn't particularly gripped by the storyline. It just wasn't believable. x.x
I did quite like the last line though. : D
Sweetness, I was only joking when I said I'd like to smash every tooth in your head.
Sweetness, I was only joking when I said by rights you should be bludgeoned in your bed.

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The Mercury Man - by yoursavior - 06-30-2008, 02:24 PM
RE: The Mercury Man - by mors ontologica - 06-30-2008, 05:49 PM
RE: The Mercury Man - by yoursavior - 07-01-2008, 12:29 AM
RE: The Mercury Man - by mors ontologica - 07-03-2008, 06:01 AM

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