06-27-2009, 06:58 PM
The shading is a bit better, but one word: contrast. The colors are way too similar to each other, and it makes the shading and highlights hard to see, especially on the shirt and face. I think the color choices could be better, too. They seem too similar to MS Paint defaults to me, and unless you're specifically going for an MS Paint default-only kinda thing (And have more practice), they don't look good.