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M&L3 Dolphin Redone
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Okay. It's good but here are my crits.

- Side of the goggles are too dark (to fix this just make all of your yellows a little bighter)
- Get rid of the 'fat belly' look, he should be more sleek
- All of the fins look like lumps. Make them more pointed and triangular
- The nose needs to be wider and have less dark shading around it
- Get rid of the excess outline on the top and bottom of the sprite
- Needs a visible bottom lip
- Find a duller blue to replace the light blue
- Goggles and nose need to be more defined, they seem to 'crash' into each other

By the way, if you haven't been -- You should take a look at his appearance in Mario Party 8. You'll be able to get him perfect if you do, trust me.
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M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by CeeY - 06-30-2009, 11:12 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by Ridge Troopa - 06-30-2009, 11:20 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by CeeY - 07-01-2009, 11:10 AM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by Neslug - 07-01-2009, 11:16 AM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by CeeY - 07-01-2009, 11:31 AM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by Vyro - 07-01-2009, 12:26 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by CeeY - 07-01-2009, 12:46 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by A.J. Nitro - 07-01-2009, 01:34 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by CeeY - 07-01-2009, 02:13 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by OrangeRakoon - 07-01-2009, 03:06 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by Gors - 07-01-2009, 04:24 PM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by Mallacxo - 07-02-2009, 01:09 AM
RE: M&L3 Dolphin Redone - by CeeY - 07-02-2009, 02:04 PM

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