07-08-2009, 08:30 PM
Looks a tad messy, and needs a more recognizable mushroom shape. It needs less stars around the bomb area and more darkness, to add a good effect.
A heat wave/expanding ring thing coming from it would be good to add, as well as structures on the ground turning to dust at a distance.
Also, the red outlines on the area with the bombermans, it's present even on areas where the light wouldn't normally reach, like the bottom part of the pipe.. It gives an ugly strange neon effect Imo.
What I do like is the ground under the explosion, the kickass spiky effect there. Im definetly looking forward to this.
A heat wave/expanding ring thing coming from it would be good to add, as well as structures on the ground turning to dust at a distance.
Also, the red outlines on the area with the bombermans, it's present even on areas where the light wouldn't normally reach, like the bottom part of the pipe.. It gives an ugly strange neon effect Imo.
What I do like is the ground under the explosion, the kickass spiky effect there. Im definetly looking forward to this.