Shaman King fan character.

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Well, it looks like yer tryin' to capture the ZX stance here, from where the origional stance's arm position is at. I'd suggest trying getting the actual sheet of Vent and use that stance for a reference, and try to either A) Use Goku's leg positions as a reference or B) Completely redo the stance. it looks like he's trying to pull a James Bond in the second idle.

Also, your head's mouth had a little bug, where the blue meets the tan. big no when you are doing JUS mouths. I took your sprite's head, and fixed the mouth for a bit to see what I mean:



See the mouth's diffrence from the old one? looks a little better doesn't it? but, it's your character of Shaman King fandom. but remember that how good the face looks does apply to this style, and adds a certain charm to it too, it's why people edit and make customs in this style. remember that this style is simple and charming a little enough to please half of an existing Jump fanbase, too.