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W.I.P Custom Mario
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Alright, I'll C+C it 'properly' then.

Your sprite, as I said before, it's crap. Why? It doesn't resemble JUS style after all. It IS an attempt, yes, but a pretty piss-poor one. It is NOT custom, too (Goddamn, when will people learn?). Custom is when your sprite is made from scratch, and an edit is when you get an already-made sprite and modify it slighty. Therefore, your sprite is an edit.

Aside from that, almost everything is wrong: the anatomy should match the characters in-game, the shading contradict itself, Mario's face is all 'dirty' making him darker, you used brown outline for blue and the colors you've chosen aren't great.

I did not forget anything: all that I had to say was that. Basically, what I'm telling you to do is scrap this and restart.

Why you used SMW style to make a JSS styled sprite is beyond my comprehension.
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W.I.P Custom Mario - by Kurai - 07-12-2009, 12:10 PM
RE: W.I.P Custom Mario - by Gors - 07-12-2009, 12:41 PM
RE: W.I.P Custom Mario - by Kurai - 07-12-2009, 12:48 PM
RE: W.I.P Custom Mario - by Gors - 07-12-2009, 01:10 PM
RE: W.I.P Custom Mario - by Kurai - 07-12-2009, 01:23 PM
RE: W.I.P Custom Mario - by Gors - 07-12-2009, 01:26 PM

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