07-04-2008, 12:36 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-04-2008, 12:38 PM by Purple_Grenadier.)
Something about the upper half of the beast looks rigid.
It must be the joints.
It's head doesn't seem to connect to it's body, it's right arm shoots out of it's torso at an odd angle. Not too sure about that though as I don't have crustacean arms to base that on. The way it's left arm is positioned also seems a bit unnatural but I can't spot why. Ah, and it's backs too straight. It's thighs should be thicker, and it's legs thinner. The feet are a bit wrong too, you should look at the back of the ankles on a reference. They stick out a bit. These are all very minor things, and I could just be wrong.
I'd give it a 4/5. But only because I'm envious of your ability. =p
Technique's great, but instead of revamping it you should have redone it.
It must be the joints.
It's head doesn't seem to connect to it's body, it's right arm shoots out of it's torso at an odd angle. Not too sure about that though as I don't have crustacean arms to base that on. The way it's left arm is positioned also seems a bit unnatural but I can't spot why. Ah, and it's backs too straight. It's thighs should be thicker, and it's legs thinner. The feet are a bit wrong too, you should look at the back of the ankles on a reference. They stick out a bit. These are all very minor things, and I could just be wrong.
I'd give it a 4/5. But only because I'm envious of your ability. =p
Technique's great, but instead of revamping it you should have redone it.