07-19-2009, 12:45 PM
Well y'know, considering you didn't make anything in it (maybe the background.. I don't remember), and have really bad english, you can't expect us to say amazing things about it. Although none of that is really a HUGE problem, other flaws were:
Bad choreography (looks like you just stole a lot of things from Alvin), and the text was hard to read, and went by too fast.
Bad choreography (looks like you just stole a lot of things from Alvin), and the text was hard to read, and went by too fast.