I'm gonna try to be nice, and you will listen and take advice or cry and get angry at me, it's up to you...
1) Line art is blocky and at the same time, well some parts of it are jagged...
2) M&L style doesn't use dithering, actually your Marlon doesn't even fit M&L style
3)That's not M&L palette
4)He must be smaller
5)Walking cycle is just... bad :/
6)Lateral poses... he looks way too fat, his head is way too off, and the shading makes no sense, the mustache must fall backwards not forwards
King sammer has mostly the same problems...
1) Line art is blocky and at the same time, well some parts of it are jagged...
2) M&L style doesn't use dithering, actually your Marlon doesn't even fit M&L style
3)That's not M&L palette
4)He must be smaller
5)Walking cycle is just... bad :/
6)Lateral poses... he looks way too fat, his head is way too off, and the shading makes no sense, the mustache must fall backwards not forwards
King sammer has mostly the same problems...