07-23-2009, 05:11 PM
(07-23-2009, 04:52 PM)Smash Wrote:(07-23-2009, 02:53 PM)Mr. Jaks Wrote:
Better?
The shadesare wrongly placed on pidgeot, mostly. I'd recommend extending the brighter shade of the belly all way down, shortening the darker shades. Lapras, for instance, shows a good example of how it should be.
Quilava looks somewhat deformed, the problem dating back to the original lines.. I think it needs to be redone entirely, with more curves and longer body.
Why thank you for such criticism.
I have to re-do both of the quilava's right?