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(07-25-2009, 08:47 AM)Angeldemonica Wrote: i used gaara's colors actually, and those were his clothes color, also i looked at gaara as a reference for the stance, and he had barely any shading on the clothes either, soo idk lol.
ps: Damn, how does Rokkoh kiriyami sound?

It's a common mistake but Japanese contains no single consonants other than "n". Rokkou Kiriyami would be about right(the double k is allowed as it is an extension of the "ko") Also, is his first name Rokkou? The Japanese put family name first and personal name after, hence Uchiha Sasuke, Son Goku ect.

My only critique is, basically the same as all the above, make his legs a bit longer, thicken out his arm, and lessen the contrast for the white streaks.

Keep it up. Genki ^_^
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JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-25-2009, 01:03 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gors - 07-25-2009, 08:26 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-25-2009, 08:47 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Kurai - 07-26-2009, 12:38 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Kosheh - 07-29-2009, 09:40 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gors - 07-25-2009, 08:54 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by CeeY - 07-25-2009, 12:19 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-25-2009, 12:21 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-25-2009, 05:08 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Alex - 07-25-2009, 08:03 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-25-2009, 08:51 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-26-2009, 01:21 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Alex - 07-26-2009, 01:27 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-26-2009, 01:30 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-26-2009, 02:03 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-26-2009, 01:24 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-27-2009, 07:52 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-27-2009, 11:20 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 08:41 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 02:12 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Kurai - 07-29-2009, 09:10 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 08:10 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 08:20 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 10:57 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-28-2009, 11:37 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 08:28 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 02:54 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 06:18 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 06:30 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 06:42 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 06:52 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 06:56 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 07:01 PM
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RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-29-2009, 07:25 PM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Gwen - 07-30-2009, 08:34 AM
RE: JUS character, should i continue? - by Kurai - 07-30-2009, 08:56 AM

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