08-02-2009, 01:43 AM
Kamek
why oh why are you using so many straight lines? You're drawing people. There are very, very few straight lines on people. Or anything organic, really.
You also need to really focus on accuracy when you're copying things. Look at the plate from artistic anatomy again; is his thigh that short in the original? Is his stomach that big? You're focussing too much on lines I think, when you should be looking at overall form. Slow the hell down and look at shapes and how they relate to each other.
why oh why are you using so many straight lines? You're drawing people. There are very, very few straight lines on people. Or anything organic, really.
You also need to really focus on accuracy when you're copying things. Look at the plate from artistic anatomy again; is his thigh that short in the original? Is his stomach that big? You're focussing too much on lines I think, when you should be looking at overall form. Slow the hell down and look at shapes and how they relate to each other.