08-04-2009, 03:04 AM
Randomizing the texture is a good idea, but I think the colors for it are too contrasted, to the point that all those little highlighted circles take away the basic shapes of the yoshi's head.
Just take a look at the shading below the eye. You should make this bumpyness less aparent and make it look more like scalyness. I would suggest slight line breaks, or less contrasted colors.
Though, I think this should wait till you shade the rest of the nose. The segment you have now is too small for crits.
Also, the hat might need another shade on the top, to show a lightsource.
Everything else seems good.
Just take a look at the shading below the eye. You should make this bumpyness less aparent and make it look more like scalyness. I would suggest slight line breaks, or less contrasted colors.
Though, I think this should wait till you shade the rest of the nose. The segment you have now is too small for crits.
Also, the hat might need another shade on the top, to show a lightsource.
Everything else seems good.