08-11-2009, 12:25 AM
I'd say that there are too many colours on the flame, and it could also be a better shape. Most cartoons tend to use 2-3 bold colours for the flames so not to make it looks washed out.
Maybe something like this:
http://www.how-to-draw-cartoons-online.c...n_fire.gif
Maybe something like this:
http://www.how-to-draw-cartoons-online.c...n_fire.gif