08-11-2009, 12:17 PM
(08-10-2009, 03:27 AM)(TSON) Wrote: "the grunts and moans of men, the screaming of woman and children"
Sexy~
Too bad the rest of it was totally cliche and unreadable. That might have made it a lot better. Try erotic fanfiction next time. Perhaps with dragons too.
Well, I don't write for porn freaks or Mills & Boons fans...
I wan two more opinions at least before I listen to you. No offence, you might be a great guy and all, but yeah... o_O Death and disaster is not sexy...
(08-11-2009, 11:08 AM)Tyvon Wrote:(08-11-2009, 10:52 AM)Comix Wrote:Shhhhhhhh.(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: WAIT
SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE
OH MY GOD
I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.
(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: it's not very good
umm...
Umm...?
So I'll keep on