Darkness' Heroes

[Vipershark]

That's because at the moment, IT DOES.
We've already said that your story is terrible.

You should start by fixing that first.

Get rid of the Chuck Norris part. Not only are chunk jokes old and unfunny, but it's also stupid.

Narrator: Germany was still (yes, still!) recovering from World War 2. After the war, with Hitler dead, Germany and the U.S made a “friendship pact”. In an attempt to help, the U.S Government made a special team, made up of beings with special powers. Humans, the courageous. Dwarves, the quick. Elves, the intelligent. Orcs, the powerful. Demons, the demonic. Trolls, the smelly.

This is the only somewhat decent part of the story, but the two things have nothing to do with each other. Why are orcs and stuff in America?