(08-18-2009, 04:52 PM)El Loco Wrote: To be REALLY honest with you, I have to say this game seems kind of cool and really creative, and I'll be willing to drop in and help you whenever I can. However I found a few things that could be fixed if you want to fix it though since it's YOUR game not MINE. Whatever your choice be I will still respect you for it, and help you. The first thing is that when your story takes place Chuck Norris was just 5, and not well-know being that his first film was in 1968. Also try to choose a different setting, time, and war because orcs, trolls, demons and elves. Don’t quite fit in the 1945 timeline. So it'd be much more fun to make up your own war and such. Another thing is that the two colonies should get into an argument by something more serious (like one colony is being total hogs, or money issues) So basically it's a nice and creative story, and I sense you have some nice creativity inside you just waiting to burst out, so let it out by creating vivid and imaginative worlds with a bright cast of characters and such. So yeah this is just advice and whether you choose to follow it or not, is your choice. I'll help you with the sprites just tell me how you want the characters to look. And well good luck, but most importantly, have fun designing your game!
Thank you so much man, I accept your help ^^ For the story, I will work back on it, but not that much, cause I want to make it funny, so Maybe i will change the war, and the years, but for the dialogue, I'll keep it like that, only get off Chuck Norris... Thank you
I will send you the artworks of the characters by E-mail... For the look...Naruto: http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/naru...heet/20541
MSS: http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/magi...heet/25615
Yu-Gi-Oh!: http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy...sheet/9762
So take the one you feel best
Thanks again