08-18-2009, 05:44 PM
The problem with the story is that it's bad.
I know it's supposed to be, but you're doing it wrong.
There's a difference between a story being "ironically bad" and "just bad." This is just bad.
I know it's supposed to be, but you're doing it wrong.
There's a difference between a story being "ironically bad" and "just bad." This is just bad.